fourteen: (bite → will you feel anything at all?)
[XIV] Xion ([personal profile] fourteen) wrote2009-10-07 04:41 am
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A little more official this time.

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[identity profile] 300yrswandering.livejournal.com 2010-12-30 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
This is really minor and probably not important in the long run, but I think you have to be careful when you write stutters. Just going "T-this" is enough as opposed to "T-t-t-this" when writing it down, as I am assuming you were also the one who wrote the stuttering girl from the Halloween plot, and at both times (including Xion's current post) it comes off as overdone and very unrealistic, as if the person is doing it on purpose rather than because they really are stuttering. It's really minor though, but it's just something I noticed.

[identity profile] fuckyeahfish.livejournal.com 2010-12-30 06:12 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh~ okay that makes more sense. From how I understood Molly's post, it was more like the stutter was formed from fear rather than an actual trait of theirs, the former which I've seen before and it never really sounded like that. I've never heard of anyone with an actual stutter so I cannot state how accurate that part is, it was just my understanding of how the stutter came to be that made me think like that.
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